Aspiring Author
4.3
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in, setting a strong foundation for an epic story. Kenneth Hilliard presents a compelling narrative with a unique, well-developed protagonist in Kentrel. The writing style is engaging, and the world-building hints at fascinating possibilities. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest and seeing how Kentrel's journey unfolds. The introduction to the new planet and the development of powers is particularly intriguing. The premise of survival and transformation on an alien world is a powerful hook. I'm curious to see how Kentrel's DNA evolution and the concept of "Judgement" will play out. The author has created a rich universe that leaves you wanting more. This opening chapter is a strong indicator of the depth the full novel will offer. I highly recommend this preview for anyone looking for a fresh take on space colonization.
This first chapter really drew me in and set up an intriguing premise. The writing style was compelling, and I found myself connecting with Kentrel's plight immediately. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest and discovering how he develops his unique abilities. The author has created such a rich world with a truly unique concept. The hints of the planet's DNA-altering effects and Kentrel's evolving powers are fascinating. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how Kentrel finds justice. This preview makes the full book feel like a valuable read.
