3 reviews
Chapters
6
Language
English
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Published
August 26, 2025
This is a futuristic sci-fi, taking place in the year 3033, about a 12yr old orphaned African American boy(Kentrel) wrongly convicted and imprisoned for a terrible crime against humanity and is sentenced to death. He along with 100 other criminals around the world are given another chance at freedom, but at the cost of leaving their home planet in exploration of space colonization. Chances of survival is low. What they will encounter is unknown. Kentrel starts his journey as the youngest and weakest human to step on this new world to becoming the strongest and most powerful being in the universe. As an orphan, Kentrel was living on the streets doing the best he can to survive. His parents mysteriously died when he was 8 years old. His father was a successful scientist who studied Biochemistry and his mother was a world renowned Galactic Archeologist and Planetologist. All he has left to remember his parents is the bible that they left him. After having a computer chip implanted in his brain stem in order to visually and audibly monitor their every move as well as their vitals, they travel 12 light years away at light speed to the planet that will be colonized which is 5x bigger than planet Earth. 1 day their is equal to 1 month on earth. The sun emits an unusual type of radiation, although the atmosphere seems like earth the gravity is 3x greater than that of earth. It is not discovered until Kentrel arrives but everything about this new planet drastically changes one's DNA at a molecular level. From the sun to the food. Once molecules begin to change your actions, activities, and also your abilities begin to reshape your DNA. Each individual develop new powers and abilities and Kentrel develops the rarest and most unique abilities of all. The beast consumed for Kentrels gifts is an Eagle and phoenix like bird 4 times larger than a Harpy Eagle on Earth. It soars higher than any bird on its native planet and absorbs the rays from the sun for strength. Its feathers glow as it absorbs sun rays. It eats all forms of meat from living creatures only. This is an extremely rare bird that is almost never seen by the normal eye until it's too late. It lives, eats, and mates above the clouds. The only time it descends is to hunt. Kentrels new skills are: Sound of intimidation- from a beast that roars. It develops into the Kings Decree- which causes anything in the surrounding atmosphere to adjust to what he has spoken. Can also upgrade into a skill called Judgement- what ever is spoken against an opponent will be done. Only the one who spoke it can reverse it. Courage buff- which increases his strength and evolves into an Encouraging Buff- which increases the strength of his team. Flash- is a special skill that blinds his opponent momentarily. As this skill strengthens it also grants immense speed and ultimately evolves into Heavenly Glo- which utilizes all of the attributes of the planets sun. This would also include the ability of flight, super speed, super strength, the ability to create light based projectiles from his hands and eyes, omni-intangibility, can create tangible light weapons to use or gift to others, and light manipulation. At its of peak of evolution, it has the potential for interstellar travel and Cosmic Awareness. Light Health- this skill allows quick regeneration that evolves into Healing Light- which allows user to rapidly heal others at the same time. Solar Ray- borrows light from the sun as a direct attack to a single opponent which evolves to attacking multiple opponents simultaneously. Light Space- is a dimensional space skill that permits him to store things in a pocket of light. Amount stored increases with perpetual use. Light of Truth- is a skill that forces the truth to be revealed. Also helps others see the truth in themselves as well as their potential. In order to unlock special skills and grow stronger Kentrel must defeat and consume strong animals, defeat strong opponents, use his skills often or frequently, frequently meditate on the bible, and endure stressful situations. Along his journey Kentrel encounters different individuals who have developed abilities from this new world as well. Abilities like, Density control, Camouflage, Adaptability, Construction illusion, Communication with animals, Shape shifting, Elemental manipulation, Invisibility, and Mind control. in which he befriends them all. He also encounters individuals who have developed abilities but have no good intentions. This story is void of the mention of devils, demons or demonic references, witches or witchcraft, satan, wizards, warlocks, necromancy or necromancers, spells, incantations, chants, casting, zombies, undead, vampires, sex or sexual innuendos, psychics, hell or hades, or spirits, magic, magicians or mage's.
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Start Writing NowKenneth Hilliard is an aspiring author with a passion for crafting compelling narratives that explore themes of hope and faith. Drawing inspiration from his own journey, Kenneth aims to connect with readers through relatable characters and thought-provoking stories.