Aspiring Author
4.7
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
The opening sets up an intriguing premise for this novel. The contrast between cultivation and Western magic is a fascinating concept to explore. Kai's disorientation and his internal assessment of the new world felt very real. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of his journey. It makes me curious to see how he'll combine his powers. Can't wait to see where this story goes. This first chapter really drew me in. I'm eager to discover what kind of Sword Immortal he becomes. The way his old power is presented against the new world's magic is quite compelling. Worth upgrading to read the complete version.
This first chapter really drew me in with its unique concept. The author does a commendable job of establishing Kai's disorientation and the stark contrast between his old and new worlds. I appreciated the analytical way Kai assesses the new magic system and his own potential. The ending effectively leaves the reader wondering how Kai will integrate his cultivation with this new form of magic. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. Can't wait to see where this story goes as Kai begins to forge his legend.
This first chapter really drew me in with its unique concept. The contrast between cultivation and Western magic is fascinating. Kai's disorientation and internal struggle feel very authentic. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of his journey. The idea of a Sword Immortal blending these worlds is exciting. I'm curious to see how he adapts and overcomes challenges. The potential for innovation within this magical system is vast. The author has created a compelling setup for a grand adventure. I'm eager to discover how his powers develop. This is a promising start to a fantasy novel.