Aspiring Author
4.7
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3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in and sets up an intriguing premise. The description of Tenebris Academy felt really atmospheric and drew me into Elias's new world. I enjoyed how the author introduced the dark and forbidden magic. The ending left me curious about what Elias will face next. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see what secrets the academy holds. This is a promising start to a fantasy story. 4.0/5 stars
This first chapter really drew me in, setting a compelling stage for Elias's journey. The author's descriptive prose paints a vivid, almost tangible picture of Tenebris Academy and its shadowy atmosphere. Elias's initial unease and curiosity are palpable, making him a character I'm eager to follow through these dark lessons. The introduction of forbidden magic and the hint of sinister motives creates a powerful hook. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to uncover the academy's secrets and Elias's ultimate fate. The writing style promises a deep dive into a fascinating, albeit dangerous, magical world. This first chapter sets up an intriguing premise that promises a rich and complex narrative. I'm curious to see how Elias navigates the treacherous path ahead and confronts the academy's true purpose. The promise of forbidden lore and high stakes makes this a title worth investing in for fantasy enthusiasts. This initial glimpse into The Obsidian Grimoire offers a strong foundation for what appears to be an exceptional fantasy read.
This first chapter really drew me in with its atmospheric build-up. Elijah Bell has a talent for crafting a palpable sense of dread and mystery. The introduction to Tenebris Academy and its forbidden curriculum is captivating. I'm really curious about the "price" of power the synopsis mentions. The obsidian-sealed letter and the academy's description are excellent hooks. The promise of dark secrets beneath the catacombs makes me eager for more. Can't wait to see where this story goes and what Elias discovers. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of The Obsidian Grimoire.