Aspiring Author
5.0
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3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in and made me smile right away. Barry's blend of awful golf and unwavering optimism is wonderfully portrayed. The author has a knack for making even disastrous golf attempts feel relatable and funny. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of Barry's journey. The opening sets up an intriguing premise for a truly comedic golf adventure. It's a fun read for anyone who's ever swung a club and questioned their life choices. Worth upgrading to read the complete version of this story. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how Barry's game (or lack thereof) evolves. 5.0/5 stars.
This first chapter of Fore! The Love of the Game was a thoroughly enjoyable introduction. The writing style is witty and immediately establishes a charmingly flawed protagonist. I found Barry's blend of extreme optimism and spectacular ineptitude quite compelling. The narrative successfully sets up his personal journey of rediscovering joy in golf. The opening sets up an intriguing premise for the rest of the story. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of Barry's golf adventures. This first chapter really drew me in. It certainly makes me want to know if Barry can finally find his game.
This first chapter really drew me in, setting up an intriguing premise with a delightful absurdity. Barry's unwavering optimism despite his spectacular golf game, or lack thereof, is instantly endearing. Drew Smith's writing style makes even the most disastrous drives sound laugh-out-loud funny. The chapter perfectly captures the spirit of a passionate amateur and his relatable struggles. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how Barry tackles his renewed pursuit of the game. Can't wait to see where this story goes, especially with that cryptic caddy on the horizon. This is perfect for anyone who loves golf and a good chuckle. Worth upgrading to read the complete version for sure.