Aspiring Author
3.7
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in, establishing a creepy vibe from the start. Eleanor Vance is a fascinatingly disturbing character, and her duality is well done. The unraveling of the Millers' marriage felt a bit quick but set up the stakes well. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the book to see how it unfolds. The subtle shift from neighborly unease to dread was very effective. The writing style makes you feel the creeping sense of danger. I'm curious to see how Eleanor's predatory nature impacts more people. Can't wait to see where this story goes next.
The opening chapter sets up an intriguing premise with its subtle build of dread. Matt James skillfully contrasts Eleanor's outward perfection with her inner darkness. I found Sarah's perspective and the unraveling of her marriage particularly compelling. The chapter effectively plants seeds of suspicion, leaving the reader wanting more answers. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. The slow burn of unease is well-executed, making this a promising start. This first chapter really drew me in, hinting at significant psychological depth. I’m curious to see how Eleanor’s manipulations unfold and if she’ll be caught. The concept of a seemingly perfect neighbor harboring such darkness is captivating. The story promises a chilling exploration of suburban secrets and predatory behavior.
This first chapter really drew me in with its unsettling portrayal of suburban dread. The way Matt James crafts Eleanor's dual nature is quite masterful and chilling. I was immediately hooked by the gradual unveiling of her true intentions. The writing style feels sharp and creates a palpable sense of unease. The ending of the chapter leaves you with so many questions and a growing sense of foreboding. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. It does a fantastic job of setting up a compelling mystery. I'm curious to see how Eleanor's manipulations will unfold and if she'll be caught. The seeds of terror are expertly sown in this initial glimpse. This opening makes the full book seem like an essential read for horror fans.