Aspiring Author
3.7
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter offers a solid introduction to a new fantasy world. I found the concept of the Library Between Worlds quite unique. Alex's feeling of not fitting in felt relatable and well-portrayed. The transition into the magical library was handled nicely. I am definitely curious about what other worlds Alex will discover. The idea of the Erasers provides a clear conflict for the story. It makes me wonder what sort of challenges Alex will face as a Keeper. The ending felt like a good jumping-off point for the adventure.
The opening sets up an intriguing premise for Alex's journey. The description of the Blackwood Library and its hidden wonders was quite evocative. Mr Prowsey's writing style is engaging, and Alex's initial feelings of displacement are relatable. The transition into the Library Between Worlds felt like a well-executed inciting incident. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how Alex navigates these new worlds. This first chapter really drew me in and made me curious about the Erasers. The concept of a library connecting different realities is a strong hook. I'm eager to see the other young Keepers and their unique world connections. This preview makes me feel like it's worth upgrading to read the complete version. The potential for adventure and discovery feels vast.
This first chapter really drew me in with its promising concept. The writing style effectively captured Alex's feeling of displacement and wonder. Discovering the Library Between Worlds felt like a genuine moment of revelation. The ending certainly leaves you wanting to know what happens next with Alex and Aethel. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this adventure. The opening sets up an intriguing premise for this fantasy world. I'm curious about the other young Keepers Alex will encounter. This book has the potential to be a really engaging read. I'm keen to see how the Library and its worlds are further explored. I enjoyed this initial glimpse and look forward to more.