Aspiring Author
4.3
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in. Leo's story and his simple desire for pizza felt very real and heartbreaking. The writing paints a clear picture of his struggles and the injustice he faces. I felt a pang of sadness seeing him turned away like that. The ending definitely makes me want to know what happens next with the influencer. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest. It feels like the opening sets up an intriguing premise. This one is worth upgrading to read the complete version.
This first chapter really drew me in, establishing Leo's plight with palpable emotion. The writing effectively conveys Leo's yearning and the harsh reality of his circumstances. I found myself quite invested in Leo's journey and the potential for his luck to change. The introduction of the influencer felt like a promising development, adding an interesting dynamic. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how this encounter unfolds. The story's message about empathy and kindness is beautifully presented from the start. Can't wait to see where this story goes and if Leo's life truly transforms. The opening sets up an intriguing premise that promises a heartwarming narrative.
This first chapter really drew me in with its heartfelt portrayal of Leo. Oscar Rodrigues has a talent for making you feel Leo's plight deeply. The writing is evocative, painting a clear picture of his difficult world. I found myself completely invested in Leo's simple dream of pizza. The injustice he faces is palpable, making the ending of the chapter quite impactful. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest and seeing how this story unfolds. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how the influencer's intervention plays out. This preview promises a story with a lot of heart and important messages.