Aspiring Author
4.0
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in and the atmosphere felt just right for horror. Chris Slevin's writing style creates a palpable sense of unease right from the start. Sarah's grief and the subtle town disturbances are effectively portrayed. The ending hints at something much larger and more sinister at play. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of 'Echoes of the Departed'. This is a great preview that makes you want to uncover Oakhaven's secrets. It feels like the opening sets up an intriguing premise for what's to come. I'm curious to see how Sarah confronts the unsettling occurrences. This story promises a good blend of personal grief and supernatural dread. I'd recommend giving this a try if you enjoy slow-burn horror.
This first chapter really drew me in with its unsettling atmosphere. Chris Slevin's writing style is effective at building a creeping sense of dread. Sarah's grief and the subtle disturbances create a compelling, if familiar, setup. The ending effectively teases a larger, more sinister force at play. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how the town's secrets unfold. The concept of unresolved deaths bleeding into the living world is explored with promise. The pacing of the escalating unease is well handled for an opening chapter. This preview has me curious about the depth of the town's ancient secrets. It feels like the groundwork for a genuinely chilling narrative. I'm looking forward to seeing how Sarah confronts these echoes of the past.
This first chapter really drew me in with its subtle build of dread. Chris Slevin has a talent for creating an unsettling atmosphere right from the start. Sarah's grief and the town's strange occurrences felt very realistically portrayed. The hints of a sinister force orchestrating events left me wanting more answers. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this novel. The way the ordinary world begins to fray is quite captivating. I can't wait to see where this story goes and what secrets Oakhaven holds. The promise of a deeper, ancient evil is incredibly intriguing. This is a strong opening for a horror story that explores familiar fears in new ways. I am quite eager to delve further into this chilling narrative.