Kundan Patil

The opening chapter sets up a good mystery with a classic setup. I liked how the town's perfect image was shattered by the murder. Detective Rossi seems like an interesting character to follow. The discovery of the murder and the hint of something darker was effective. I'm curious to see how the secrets of Oakhaven unfold. This first chapter really drew me in. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest. Can't wait to see where this story goes. 3.5/5 stars

This first chapter really drew me in, establishing Oakhaven's unsettling atmosphere quite effectively. The contrast between Sterling's public persona and his brutal end immediately sparks curiosity. Patil's writing style sets a promising tone for the unfolding mystery. The chapter successfully plants seeds of suspicion and unease within the town's facade. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how Rossi unravels these secrets. The opening sets up an intriguing premise for the novel's deeper exploration of deceit. I can see the potential for a complex and engaging mystery here. Worth upgrading to read the complete version to dive deeper into Oakhaven's darkness.

This first chapter really drew me in with its promising setup. The contrast between Oakhaven's facade and the brutal reality of the murder was striking. Detective Rossi's introduction hints at a complex character with depth. The discovery of the murder and the disruption it causes is an effective hook. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. The opening sets up an intriguing premise for the full book. This preview offers a compelling writing style and a strong concept. It feels like there's a lot more to uncover in Oakhaven's secrets. I'm curious to see how Rossi navigates the town's elite and their hidden lives. I can't wait to see where this story goes next.