Sadie “Smily” Speid

The opening chapter of Crimson Hearts, Hallway Terrors sets up a spooky high school vibe. The idea of Northwood High being more of a trap than a school is pretty cool. Elara’s normal routine is a good contrast to the incoming weirdness. That new student, Kael, definitely has a mysterious aura about him, I'm curious about him. The hints of supernatural stuff happening are subtle but noticeable. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how this forbidden romance plays out. The ending left me wondering what would happen between Elara and Kael next. This chapter makes me want to know more about the creatures and the school's secrets. It feels like a solid start to a unique paranormal romance. I'm curious to see if their relationship can survive the horrors of the school.

This first chapter presents a decent, if somewhat familiar, blend of supernatural mystery and budding romance. The setting of Northwood High as a treacherous labyrinth is an interesting concept that definitely sparks curiosity. Elara's ordinary perspective contrasted with Kael's enigmatic presence is a classic setup that shows promise for their dynamic. The subtle supernatural occurrences build tension effectively, making the school feel genuinely unsettling. I am somewhat interested in seeing how these two characters navigate the terrors and develop their connection further. The premise is intriguing enough to consider reading more, especially to understand the school's true purpose. The writing is clear, though it leans into some well-trodden tropes of the genre. Can't wait to see where this story goes and if the horrors live up to the early build-up. The opening sets up an intriguing premise that makes me want to see the full scope of this world. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see if it lives up to its potential.

This first chapter really drew me in with its unique blend of high school and horror. The atmosphere of Northwood High as a disorienting trap was very effectively established. Elara's normalcy contrasted well with the mysterious new student's presence. The subtle supernatural occurrences built a sense of creeping dread nicely. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how their connection develops. The ending left me with a strong desire to uncover Kael's secrets. The premise of a forbidden romance amidst such terror is quite compelling. This first preview certainly makes the full story sound very promising.