Xander Clay

This first chapter really drew me in and made me feel for Lily right away. I loved how the author introduced Leo and hinted at his secret without giving too much away. Lily's longing for family felt very real and it's easy to connect with her loneliness. The scene with the dog was a great way to show Leo's abilities and build suspense. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. It feels like the start of a heartwarming and unique friendship. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how their bond develops. Worth upgrading to read the complete version.

This first chapter offers a promising start to Lily's journey. The introduction of Leo and his mysterious nature was particularly engaging. Clay's writing style effectively portrays Lily's yearning for connection. The encounter with the dog and Leo's reaction created a strong, intriguing moment. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how their friendship develops. The setup for their unconventional family dynamic is compelling. Can't wait to see where this story goes with the secrets and challenges ahead. The pacing of the reveal felt well-handled for an initial chapter. This first chapter really drew me in with its blend of loneliness and mystery. It makes a case for the value proposition of the full version.

This first chapter of My Batty Brother is utterly charming and full of promise. Lily's longing for connection is so palpable, making her encounter with Leo feel truly special. The writing style is engaging, quickly drawing you into Lily's world and her burgeoning suspicions. Leo's introduction and the subtle hints of his secret are incredibly compelling, making the ending a perfect hook. I'm already invested in Lily and Leo's unique friendship and can't wait to see where this story goes. This first chapter really drew me in, and I'm very eager to dive into the rest of the book. The opening sets up an intriguing premise that makes you want to discover more about this unconventional family. It’s clear this story has a lot of heart, and I'm curious to see how their bond develops.