Aspiring Author
3.7
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
The opening sets up an intriguing premise that definitely made me want to know more. The locked room setup is classic and handled well, even with the slight name confusion. Detective Corbin seems like a decent investigator, and I'm curious about his methods. The clues like the smudge and the glove were a nice touch for a mystery fan. I'm not entirely sure about the pacing based on this preview, but it's a good start. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how this complex web is unraveled. This first chapter really drew me in, despite a few minor questions. It's worth upgrading to read the complete version if you enjoy a good puzzle.
This first chapter really drew me in with its classic locked-room mystery setup. Detective Corbin's methodical introduction and the subtle clues like the smudge and glove are very effective. The writing style is professional and sets a compelling atmosphere right from the start. The discovery of Alistair Finch's body in his locked study creates immediate intrigue and anticipation. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this gripping short mystery. It feels like this story is going to offer a clever resolution and a satisfying narrative. This initial preview suggests that The Silent Witness is worth upgrading to read the complete version. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how Corbin untangles this complex web.
This first chapter really drew me in with its classic locked-room setup. The writing style is solid, establishing a good sense of place and introducing Detective Corbin effectively. The puzzle of Arthur Sterling's death is presented as quite perplexing from the start. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. The clues, like the glove and smudge, hint at a clever investigation ahead. This opening makes me curious about the secrets hidden within Sterling's life. It certainly sets up an intriguing premise for a full mystery. Worth considering for a quick, suspenseful read.