Matthew Holdsworth

This first chapter really drew me in with its atmospheric description of the Necropolis. The writing style effectively builds a sense of dread and mystery right from the start. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the story and learning more about these characters. The blend of personal demons with the external horror of the city is a compelling concept. It sets up an intriguing premise and I'm eager to see how the characters cope with the city's influence. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

This first chapter really drew me in, establishing a dark and atmospheric setting. The writing style is evocative, painting a vivid picture of the Sable Necropolis. Introducing the trio of Kaelen, Lyra, and Elara effectively grounds the narrative's stakes. The inherent dangers and psychological toll of the Necropolis are palpable from the start. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how their individual quests intertwine. The author has crafted a compelling hook that promises a deep dive into horror and mystery. The premise of confronting inner demons alongside external threats is particularly engaging. I'm curious to uncover the ancient bargain and its full impact on their world. This chapter feels like a solid foundation for what promises to be a dark and immersive read. Worth upgrading to read the complete version to explore the secrets within the Necropolis.

This first chapter really drew me in. The atmosphere of the Sable Necropolis is incredibly well-established and unsettling. Matthew Holdsworth's writing style paints a vivid, chilling picture of the city of the dead. I'm intrigued by the trio of adventurers and their individual motivations for entering such a dangerous place. The hints of psychological horror alongside the physical threats promise a truly gripping story. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how their internal struggles intertwine with the city's horrors. The setup for the curse and its connection to the living world is a powerful hook. This chapter makes me very keen to uncover the secrets buried within the Necropolis. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this tale. It feels like the start of something truly special in the horror genre.