This first chapter really drew me in with its creepy atmosphere.
The contrast between the festive carnival and the emerging horror was well done.
I liked how the author built the suspense around the clown's presence.
The hints of danger for Maya, Liam, and Chloe make me curious about their fate.
I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the story.
The opening sets up an intriguing premise for a thrilling ride.
It feels like a solid start for a scary carnival story.
I'm looking forward to finding out what the clown's motives are.
This preview makes me want to see how the teenagers survive the night.
It’s a good glimpse into what promises to be a suspenseful read.
