Aspiring Author
4.7
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter really drew me in, setting a charming Halloween mood. The description of the enchanted forest and its traditions felt very imaginative. Léo seems like a relatable and courageous protagonist for this kind of adventure. The reveal about the lost stars and the mission for Léo creates a good sense of urgency. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how he finds them. The concept of the magic behind the pumpkins is a delightful idea for a fantasy story. It hints at some fun interactions with friendly forest creatures. This opening makes me curious about the riddles and challenges ahead. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how the celebration unfolds. It feels like a wonderfully magical journey is just beginning.
This first chapter really drew me in with its enchanting atmosphere. The concept of luminous pumpkins powered by lost stars is quite captivating. Roof's descriptive prose paints a vivid picture of the enchanted forest. Léo's immediate mission to find the stars creates a strong sense of urgency. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how he accomplishes his quest. The promise of simple riddles and friendly creatures sounds delightful for younger readers. This preview effectively sets up an intriguing premise for a magical adventure. It makes me curious about the challenges Léo will face and the allies he'll meet. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
This first chapter really drew me in with its enchanting description of the forest. I enjoyed how the magical Halloween concept was introduced and the promise of adventure. Léo's character feels like a relatable protagonist for this kind of quest. The reveal of the lost stars and the mission sets a good hook for what's to come. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the story to see how Léo succeeds. The idea of helping the pumpkins and finding the stars is quite charming. The writing style is accessible and paints a vivid picture of the enchanted setting. This preview has me curious about the creatures Léo will meet and the challenges he'll face. It certainly made me want to explore more of Sebastien Roof's magical world. Worth upgrading to read the complete version of this promising fantasy tale.