Aspiring Author
3.7
Rating Breakdown
3 total ratings
This first chapter definitely made me curious about the story. Inspector Aryan seems like a solid character to follow through this mystery. The setup of the locked-room murder in an upscale area is intriguing. I did wonder a bit about the victim's business partner's overly emotional reaction. It felt like a good start, though, with plenty of room for twists. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see if Aryan can unravel it all. The beginning sets up an intriguing premise for sure. I’m curious to see what other secrets are hidden.
This first chapter really drew me in, setting up an intriguing premise with genuine promise. Inspector Aryan's introduction as a seasoned investigator feels well-crafted, hinting at depth. The writing style is smooth, pulling you into the unsettling atmosphere of the crime scene effectively. The mystery of the locked room and the subtle clues like the broken photo frame create immediate questions. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to unravel the layers of this complex murder. The author, Mahima Akter Mahi, has managed to pique my curiosity significantly with this start. It leaves you wanting to discover the hidden past and the truth behind the "shadow people." This preview makes it feel worth upgrading to read the complete version.
This first chapter really drew me in and established a compelling mystery. Inspector Aryan’s introduction was insightful, hinting at his sharp intellect. The author crafted a scene that effectively built suspense around the murder. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to unravel this complex puzzle. The descriptions made the setting feel vivid and the crime unsettling. Can't wait to see where this story goes and if Aryan can find the truth. The setup for a deep conspiracy is quite intriguing. This glimpse certainly makes the full book seem worth exploring.