Toncy Rai

This first chapter really drew me in with its promise of a classic enemies-to-lovers dynamic. Ava's meticulous nature and Gabriel's commanding presence are introduced effectively, creating immediate tension. The writing style is smooth, and I enjoyed getting a glimpse into Ava's internal struggles. The foundation is laid for a compelling slow burn romance, hinting at deeper connections. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the book to see their relationship develop. The opening sets up an intriguing premise with plenty of potential for drama and swoon-worthy moments. Can't wait to see where this story goes and how these two characters navigate their undeniable chemistry. Worth upgrading to read the complete version for more of this engaging story.

The opening sets up an intriguing premise for Ava and Gabriel's dynamic. The writing style is solid, and Ava's internal struggles are well-portrayed. Gabriel's presence feels appropriately imposing, hinted at by his scar and intellect. The chapter does a good job of establishing the central conflict and hinting at attraction. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of the book to see how their relationship develops. This first chapter really drew me in, and I'm curious to explore their vulnerabilities further. It's clear there's a lot of potential for dramatic tension and emotional depth. I'm looking forward to seeing if the story lives up to the promise of these initial interactions.

This first chapter really drew me in, setting a compelling stage for Ava and Gabriel. The author's style is engaging, effectively introducing complex characters and their simmering tension. I appreciated how the narrative explored Ava's internal struggles and her driven nature. Gabriel's presence is powerful, and the hints of his past add a layer of intrigue. The dynamic between Ava and Gabriel feels like it has great potential for development. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of their story. Worth upgrading to read the complete version. Can't wait to see where this story goes.