JR R Whompus

This first chapter definitely set a creepy tone for Havenwood. The concept of surveillance turning sinister felt quite unsettling. Maya and Liam came across as relatable teenagers navigating this weird situation. The subtle glitches and whispers were a good hook for what's to come. I'm pretty curious to find out what's really going on with the Watcher's Eye. This first chapter really drew me in. It made me think about privacy in our own lives. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest. Worth upgrading to read the complete version. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

This first chapter really drew me in with its unsettling exploration of modern surveillance. The writing style is clean and effectively establishes the pervasive sense of unease. Maya and Liam are presented as relatable protagonists, and their perspective on the town's utopia is compelling. The subtle glitches in the system are a clever and creepy hook that leaves you wanting answers. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this to see how these anomalies unfold. The concept of technology turning against its users is a fascinating horror premise. Can't wait to see where this story goes and if Havenwood's perfect facade crumbles. This preview certainly makes a case for experiencing the full narrative.

This first chapter really drew me in with its chilling premise. The town of Havenwood feels both disturbingly familiar and terrifyingly futuristic. Maya and Liam's growing unease with the surveillance system is palpable. The subtle glitches are masterfully unsettling, hinting at deeper darkness. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how this unfolds. Can't wait to see where this story goes.