This first chapter really drew me in and established the world nicely. The concept of inherited hatred shaping destinies is a strong foundation. Elara and Daemon are presented with a compelling, instant animosity. The author clearly sets the stage for a high-stakes romance. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. The writing style makes me curious about their future encounters. It makes me want to see how their animosity turns into attraction. I'm eager to discover how their families' feuds will play out. This opening makes me want to find out if love can conquer hate. Worth upgrading to read the complete version to see their journey.

The opening sets up an intriguing premise for "Shattered between us." Priya Srivastava effectively lays the groundwork for deep-seated conflict and character animosity. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. The author does a solid job of establishing the world and the ingrained hatred between the houses. The initial encounter between Elara and Daemon feels impactful, hinting at the forbidden sparks to come. I found myself curious about how their animosity would evolve into something more. This first chapter really drew me in with its exploration of inherited feuds. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

This first chapter really drew me in with its intense portrayal of inherited animosity. Priya Srivastava masterfully establishes the deep rift between the warring houses. The character introductions for Elara and Daemon are compelling, hinting at complex dynamics. The marketplace encounter served as a potent, visceral hook for what's to come. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of Shattered between us. This opening sets up an intriguing premise for a passionate romance. It feels like a strong foundation for exploring forbidden love amidst conflict. I'm curious to see how their animosity transforms into attraction. This first chapter promises a captivating journey of passion and peril. I'm excited to dive into the full story and see how they navigate their fated connection.