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This first chapter really drew me in with its creepy atmosphere. The setup for Blackwood Manor and its history felt genuinely unsettling. I liked how the different personalities of the teenagers started to emerge. The decision to actually go to the manor felt like a good point to leave us wondering. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see what happens to them. The concept of the house itself feeling wrong is a solid horror hook. It successfully builds a sense of foreboding about the town and the manor. The author has created a compelling start to what promises to be a chilling story.

This first chapter really drew me in with its atmospheric buildup. The author masterfully establishes the unsettling atmosphere of Oakhaven and Blackwood Manor. I found the character introductions, particularly Maya and Liam's dynamic, to be quite compelling. The transition from idyllic town to impending doom felt natural and created a strong sense of unease. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest to see how the teenagers cope with what they awaken. The description of the manor itself as a living entity is a promising concept for the horror genre. It effectively sets up the stakes and the mystery surrounding the family's disappearance. This preview makes me curious about the secrets the walls themselves might hold. The pacing of the chapter, leading up to their decision, felt deliberate and earned. I’m eager to discover the true nature of the ancient evil that resides there.

This first chapter for The Whispering Walls certainly sets an unsettling tone for Oakhaven. The description of Blackwood Manor and its legends felt suitably creepy and drew me in. The introduction of the four teenagers and their motivation for exploring the manor was well-paced. I liked the hint that the folklore is more than just ghosts, hinting at something deeper. The way the chapter ends leaves you wanting to know what happens when they actually enter. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. It feels like a solid foundation for a chilling horror experience. This first chapter really drew me in, making me curious about the manor's secrets. Worth upgrading to read the complete version to see how their night unfolds. Can't wait to see where this story goes.