Jermain Smikle

We need more, that was just grandma's sppon after she makes the cake mix. We need the cake i cant wait !!!

This first chapter really drew me in. The way the author set up the desperation and the initial planning felt very real. I liked the glimpse into the characters' lives and why they felt this was their only option. The detailed planning process was fascinating, making me wonder if it would actually work. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story to see how it all plays out. The idea of their bonds fraying under pressure is a great hook. It feels like the start of something much bigger and more complicated. Worth upgrading to read the complete version to see the fallout. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

This first chapter really drew me in and promises a compelling narrative. The author has established a strong foundation for the characters and their motivations. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story to see how things unfold. The description of their shared discontent and desperation feels authentic. The meticulous planning and the creation of "The Five-Point Plan" is intriguing. It clearly sets the stage for a thrilling descent into the consequences of their actions. Can't wait to see where this story goes after this promising start. This feels like a solid setup for the thrilling ride the description promises. The writing style is engaging and effectively conveys the characters' plight. I'm very curious to see how their individual skills play out in the execution of the plan.

The opening chapter of The Five-Point Plan definitely grabbed my attention. I found the setup of these five friends and their shared dissatisfaction compelling. The writing style felt grounded, making their desperation feel very real. It’s clear the author is building towards something significant here. I'm definitely interested in reading the rest of this story. Can't wait to see where this plan takes them next. This first chapter really drew me in. It’s a promising start to what looks like a thrilling ride.